Roxi scanned the ocean, everything was fine. The boat swayed in the calm waves as Roxi began to take off her flip flops. The marsh land was laying in the sun like gold, and the chlorine stung her skin as she jumped into the deep blue. She popped back up and waved ashore, climbing back up to the boat. She took the paddle and rowed back to the marsh land where Clayson sat, spewing the tiny grass into the ocean. "Sorry I took so long" Roxi called out, flopping towards him as her white long sleeve shirt clung onto her bikini. She roped the boat onto the dock and sat beside him on the beach towel, "It's okay, I wasn't planning to go out today" Clayson stated, his black hair blew in the calm winds. His squinted hazel eyes looked up into the purple sky and light skin complexion looked darker from sitting out in the sun. She stared at Clayson and laid beside him. Penn Brooks, was the original suburbs, you had a few fun places here and there but there wasn't much to do besides getting into trouble. School is not like those city schools where they have cliques or whatever. To Penn Brooks citizens, that is just so cliche. People just have their own paths, some like to boat others just graze along there front lawns. But that is how it used to be in Penn Brooks, just a little suburban town that isn't into fictional city stuff or even so-called surburban lengends. That is until everything about the little surburban take a turn for the best and worst. "We're the Adolescents Whining" Clayson whispered, as he stared into the sky.
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4 comments:
Good beginning.Not so sure if you want the "chlorine" descript in there..since they are at the beach..right? You know, more sea kind of stuff...but really hearty beginning full of sunny descripts and the like.
Good to hear from you. Glad to see you writing..but take your time.
thankx so much for the note. i appreciate it. i really like this layout. sounds like a good summer story.
all the best.
How's the writing coming...will you have a story in poetry?
I agree with Just Ivy. Great opening. Looking forward to reading the rest.
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